Good stick short. The fight itself is really smooth, and has a bit of a groundhog day hint. I would suggest taking a look at your ratings: with the purple "item", fight, blood, and language this doesn't quite fit with an E rating.
Good stick short. The fight itself is really smooth, and has a bit of a groundhog day hint. I would suggest taking a look at your ratings: with the purple "item", fight, blood, and language this doesn't quite fit with an E rating.
Really well animated! The hem of the dress moves as naturally as it can for being obstructed by two catgirl tails. I wouldn't mind some audio with it, maybe as a means of avoiding copyright issues: something almost like a metronome leading to the Nya reveal.
Pretty good. The sound was a bit of an issue with crackling around the 0:20 mark. Also, why aren't they wearing shirts, don't they know the No Shirt No Shoes No Service rule? They're gonna be waiting forever to get a drink.
It’s always nice to see good quality stick fights. It was smooth, and I enjoyed some of the foreground effects like the blades of grass at their feet. I wanted to also say great work on the blood effects!
Thank you. That blood took a bit of work, so it's nice to hear it's payed off
The sensible solution would be to have one get the bill this time because I'm sure the other one will make good on it "the next time". Except there never is a next time, is there Mark... you just... make a promise that we'll have beers again. And then you always have other plans...
...Oh. A review. Right. Nice art style, it was interesting to see the switch in their personalities displayed through the eyes. I especially like the awkward "waiting for machine to connect" segment, since that always seems to be the case when you just want to be gone.
Cheers Pergrinus
Nice work! Interesting to have a contrast of colour in the "new world". As an aside, I found the squishing sound entirely unwholesome, so good work on the foley :)
Thanks for your review =)
The monochrome/lineart is an interesting style. I personally wouldn't mind a tiny hint of colour on whatever the main subject is to make it distinct. Audio seems a bit loud and crackly, but overall a great reminder for all of us.
Thank you for the feedback! I gotta take another look at my audio. Can't have it sounding like that in the future! :O
Nice combination of photo-realism and animation. Sounds like it was all the same voice actor (I assume you) but there was enough variation in the voices to be distinct. There's what sounds like a hiccup in an empty room at 1:07, which I'm guessing is the impact. Seems a bit out of place with the rest of it.
the voice acting was done by the amazingly talented Ross Plaskow, and thanks for the feedback!
Interesting style. Good job syncing the audio and mouths. It seems to be a bit of an anti-joke, since it build up to how spicy things are. Audio crackled in a few spots (taking bite of sandwich), which is the only big thing I picked up on. Good work!
I want buns of steel but also buns of cinnamon.
Age 37
Homesteader
Canada
Joined on 11/9/05