The knock at 0:58 was so crisp it fooled me twice, which says a lot about the audio quality and I suppose my waiting for gremlins to come to the door and beg for candy.
I liked the range from narrator to small fork-knife cosplayer. You mentioned in a review reply you recorded this; I hope the pants pissing references and super saiyan moment at 2:27 didn't give you troubles with management or housekeeping. Knowing this after the judging helps reinforce my scoring, as you produced a high quality submission in a restrictive environment.
Good work, I'm looking forward to what you come up with next!